hmm... lets see... i think it would be better if you just put the balloons near the guys head, instead of putting it on a black screen. i mean, you were DESCRIBING whats happening through text under a char (robber, holding dave )!
the camera angles were uh... stupid.. i mean, get more camera men and locate them to work with diffarant angles, dont use the actor to film it with cinematic view . oh and another thing that bothered me, and always will, is the GUI. remove it, theres an option for it in vice citys options.
the story was nice. quite corny but nice .
overall, lowest score here: 7/10. take it as a complimet as the lowest score is so high .