gunstn Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 this is my first stund movie it is real short(and bad) http://gunstn.spymac.net/the beginning.wmv Link to comment
NosGoth Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 I have fixed the link for you since you don't seem to know that spaces can't be done in links. For a space you type "%20". Gunstn First Stuntvideo Feedback: It's not very good. Very bad editing, very bad stunts and its extremeky short. Even for a first attempt it could have been much better. Also try to get a newer version of Fraps so the text won't show up anymore. Overall: 5.3/10 for good effort. Keep it up and maybe you'll make a very impressive stuntvideo some day. Link to comment
Slothman Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 harsh nosgoth, but completely true. gunstn- to improve in the future i have some advice -"stund" is actally spelled "stunt" -have a look at the other videos around this forum, you might get some ideas for some good stunts -try to get stunts that you don't fall off yer bike you can do better. see me after class Link to comment
SM xenex Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 I have to agree with nosgoth. I mean the amount of stunts you did i would be able to count them on my fingers, and i did , they were 9 .And this is counting the 4 stunts you did inside the building,. none of your stunts were amazing,,well sorry ill tell you the truth all sucked, the masrs cafe one i suggest you work on that spot, i dont think i seen it in another movie, and doing a jump at a place that was never done before is always good, keep trying you have a long road ahead . Link to comment
gunstn Posted October 2, 2004 Author Share Posted October 2, 2004 k but a newer vercion of fraps, I think I have the last vercion help and, I Have looked to many other stund vids olready Link to comment
Ramon Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 well it isnt that bad for a 1st vid only some things could be much better, even in a 1st stuntvid: editing on music was bad, allotof crap camera views and bad stunts and extremely short 5.5/10 Link to comment
DJ GTA Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 For you very first one its wasn't bad,I have seen worst. Good choice of music artist but maybe go with a different some like traffic or fight 643. 5.9\10 Link to comment
gunstn Posted October 2, 2004 Author Share Posted October 2, 2004 yes I mead it to fast I had picked up the wrong my letters are small on my pc and trafic and that song are standing under each other toke the wrong and didn't looked to it before I uploadid it I did stupid, but I started egain, and from noon I am tricking and have only a few stunds I like Link to comment
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