new JoinQuit

please help me I dont know what are bad :c

addEventHandler('onClientPlayerJoin', root, 
    function() 
        dxDrawText("'* ' .. getPlayerName(source) .. ' a entrado al server",504.0,4.0,574.0,20.0,tocolor(200,0,0,255),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerChangeNick', root, 
    function(oldNick, newNick) 
        outputChatBox('* ' .. oldNick .. ' is now known as ' .. newNick, 255, 100, 100) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerQuit', root, 
    function(reason) 
        dxDrawText("'* ' .. getPlayerName(source) .. ' a salido del server [' .. reason .. ']'",503.0,16.0,573.0,32.0,tocolor(0,0,255,170),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
    end 
) 

local messageJoin = "" 
local messageQuit = "" 
  
function renderPlayerJoined ( ) 
    dxDrawText("* ".. messageJoin,504.0,4.0,574.0,20.0,tocolor(200,0,0,255),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
function renderPlayerLeft ( ) 
    dxDrawText("* ".. messageQuit,503.0,16.0,573.0,32.0,tocolor(0,0,255,170),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerJoin', root, 
    function() 
        messageJoin = getPlayerName(source) .. " a entrado al servidor." 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoined ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoined ) 
            end 
            ,5000,1 
        ) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerChangeNick', root, 
    function(oldNick, newNick) 
        outputChatBox('* ' .. oldNick .. ' is now known as ' .. newNick, 255, 100, 100) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerQuit', root, 
    function(reason) 
        messageQuit  = getPlayerName(source) .. " a salido del server [" .. reason .. "]" 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
            end 
            ,5000,1 
        ) 
    end 
) 

local messageJoin = "" 
local messageQuit = "" 
  
function renderPlayerJoined ( ) 
    dxDrawText("* ".. messageJoin,504.0,4.0,574.0,20.0,tocolor(200,0,0,255),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
function renderPlayerLeft ( ) 
    dxDrawText("* ".. messageQuit,503.0,16.0,573.0,32.0,tocolor(0,0,255,170),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerJoin', root, 
    function() 
        messageJoin = getPlayerName(source) .. " a entrado al servidor." 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoin ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoin ) 
            end 
            ,5000,1, 
        ) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerChangeNick', root, 
    function(oldNick, newNick) 
        outputChatBox('* ' .. oldNick .. ' is now known as ' .. newNick, 255, 100, 100) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerQuit', root, 
    function(reason) 
        messageQuit = getPlayerName(source) .. " a salido del server [" .. reason .. "]" 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
            end 
            ,5000,1, 
        ) 
    end 
) 

May I ask what did you change on my script?

In onClientPlayerQuit event you wrote messageLeft instead of messageQuit.

In onClientPlayerQuit event you wrote messageLeft instead of messageQuit.

Oh, I see, btw, you forgot to remove the extra commas in the timer(s).

the dxtext dont appear only in chatbox

Copy my code again.

In onClientPlayerQuit event you wrote messageLeft instead of messageQuit.

Oh, I see, btw, you forgot to remove the extra commas in the timer(s).

you forgot to remove the extra commas in the timer(s).

Where? LOL

        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoin ) 
            end 
            ,5000,1, -- Here. 
        ) 

If you run the script, you'll notice.

I've not seen this, I have only changed the variable name

thnx man nice JoinQuit

You're welcome.

and how I can do for the colorcodes dont appear ?

Use the function dxDrawColorText.

You can find this function in the forums

I dont find the function man :c

I do this ?

function dxDrawColorText(str, ax, ay, bx, by, color, scale, font, left, top, clip, wordbreak, postGUI) 
    local pat = "(.-)#(%x%x%x%x%x%x)" 
    local s, e, cap, col = str:find(pat, 1) 
    local last = 1 
    while s do 
        if cap == "" and col then color = tocolor( tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 1, 2 ) ), tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 3, 4 ) ), 
        tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 5, 6 ) ), 255 ) end 
        if s ~= 1 or cap ~= "" then 
            local w = dxGetTextWidth(cap, scale, font) 
            dxDrawText( cap, ax, ay, ax + w, by, color, scale, font ) 
            ax = ax + w 
            color = tocolor( tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 1, 2 ) ), tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 3, 4 ) ), tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 5, 6 ) ), 255 ) 
        end 
        last = e + 1 
        s, e, cap, col = str:find( pat, last ) 
    end 
    if last <= #str then 
        cap = str:sub( last ) 
        local w = dxGetTextWidth( cap, scale, font ) 
        dxDrawText( cap, ax, ay, ax + w, by, color, scale, font, left, top, clip, wordbreak, postGUI ) 
    end 
end 
  
local messageJoin = "" 
local messageQuit = "" 
  
function renderPlayerJoined ( ) 
    dxDrawText("* ".. messageJoin,504.0,4.0,574.0,20.0,tocolor(200,0,0,255),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
function renderPlayerLeft ( ) 
    dxDrawText("* ".. messageQuit,503.0,16.0,573.0,32.0,tocolor(0,0,255,170),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerJoin', root, 
    function() 
        messageJoin = getPlayerName(source) .. " a entrado al servidor." 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoined ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoined ) 
            end 
            ,6000,1 
        ) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerChangeNick', root, 
    function(oldNick, newNick) 
        outputChatBox('* ' .. oldNick .. ' is now known as ' .. newNick, 255, 100, 100) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerQuit', root, 
    function(reason) 
        messageQuit  = getPlayerName(source) .. " a salido del server [" .. reason .. "]" 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
            end 
            ,6000,1 
        ) 
    end 
) 

?

LOL

function dxDrawColorText(str, ax, ay, bx, by, color, scale, font, left, top, clip, wordbreak, postGUI) 
    local pat = "(.-)#(%x%x%x%x%x%x)" 
    local s, e, cap, col = str:find(pat, 1) 
    local last = 1 
    while s do 
        if cap == "" and col then color = tocolor( tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 1, 2 ) ), tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 3, 4 ) ), 
        tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 5, 6 ) ), 255 ) end 
        if s ~= 1 or cap ~= "" then 
            local w = dxGetTextWidth(cap, scale, font) 
            dxDrawText( cap, ax, ay, ax + w, by, color, scale, font ) 
            ax = ax + w 
            color = tocolor( tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 1, 2 ) ), tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 3, 4 ) ), tonumber( "0x"..col:sub( 5, 6 ) ), 255 ) 
        end 
        last = e + 1 
        s, e, cap, col = str:find( pat, last ) 
    end 
    if last <= #str then 
        cap = str:sub( last ) 
        local w = dxGetTextWidth( cap, scale, font ) 
        dxDrawText( cap, ax, ay, ax + w, by, color, scale, font, left, top, clip, wordbreak, postGUI ) 
    end 
end 
  
local messageJoin = "" 
local messageQuit = "" 
  
function renderPlayerJoined ( ) 
    dxDrawColorText("* ".. messageJoin,504.0,4.0,574.0,20.0,tocolor(200,0,0,255),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
function renderPlayerLeft ( ) 
    dxDrawColorText("* ".. messageQuit,503.0,16.0,573.0,32.0,tocolor(0,0,255,170),0.7,"sans","left","top",false,false,false) 
end 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerJoin', root, 
    function() 
        messageJoin = getPlayerName(source) .. " #ffffffa entrado al servidor." 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoined ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerJoined ) 
            end 
            ,6000,1 
        ) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerChangeNick', root, 
    function(oldNick, newNick) 
        outputChatBox('* ' .. oldNick .. ' #ffffffis now known as ' .. newNick, 255, 100, 100) 
    end 
) 
  
addEventHandler('onClientPlayerQuit', root, 
    function(reason) 
        messageQuit  = getPlayerName(source) .. " #ffffffa salido del server [" .. reason .. "]" 
        addEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
        setTimer ( 
            function ( ) 
                removeEventHandler ( "onClientRender", root, renderPlayerLeft ) 
            end 
            ,6000,1 
        ) 
    end 
) 

thnx man sorry Im very nob

No problem